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Starting the sample pages again to submit to Marvel. I dedicated the day to starting this over from scratch and finishing it up in inks.
Feedback is always welcome!
The story was written by
Colorists, if you want to take a shot at it, feel free, just let me see it when you're done
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Spiderman is © Marvel Entertainment.
Feedback is always welcome!
The story was written by
Colorists, if you want to take a shot at it, feel free, just let me see it when you're done
.Spiderman is © Marvel Entertainment.
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© 2013 - 2024 TheAdrianNelson
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I'm digging these pages bro! This is some good work. I agree with J-Mason about some of the bg's in your panels. I recommend deciding on what part of town this action is taking place, and gathering as much Ref as possible. I like to use Google earth to map out a route, then find reference to those corresponding areas.
Also, you gotta be careful of where you place your characters in your panels. In panel 1, Spidey swings up, and out camera right. Then we follow him up and right again, then in panel 3, we're going up and right, and in the last panel we're going up and out to the right. It should be a smooth transition between the panels. Almost as if we're filming the action. In panel 1, it probably would work a little better if we came at cam more. It would be more dynamic, and set up panel 2 a little better. It feels like H and SM are too close to the top of the frame in panel 2, and the angle on the buildings looks a little off. The perspective should be so that it points directly at SM and Hulk, that way our eyes follow that action. The right side of the panel is almost wasted space.
In panel 3, I think they're placement should be further down in the panel. Perhaps Hulk is landing, scaring the crap out of everyone. It would show Hulk as not caring about his surroundings, as long as he gets Spidey. Or we could reverse this shot. Spidey swings at Cam, while Hulk lands.
Your work is boss!! And I like the way that it looks, but it's the little things that put it over the top;] All in all, good show mate!
-jus
Also, you gotta be careful of where you place your characters in your panels. In panel 1, Spidey swings up, and out camera right. Then we follow him up and right again, then in panel 3, we're going up and right, and in the last panel we're going up and out to the right. It should be a smooth transition between the panels. Almost as if we're filming the action. In panel 1, it probably would work a little better if we came at cam more. It would be more dynamic, and set up panel 2 a little better. It feels like H and SM are too close to the top of the frame in panel 2, and the angle on the buildings looks a little off. The perspective should be so that it points directly at SM and Hulk, that way our eyes follow that action. The right side of the panel is almost wasted space.
In panel 3, I think they're placement should be further down in the panel. Perhaps Hulk is landing, scaring the crap out of everyone. It would show Hulk as not caring about his surroundings, as long as he gets Spidey. Or we could reverse this shot. Spidey swings at Cam, while Hulk lands.
Your work is boss!! And I like the way that it looks, but it's the little things that put it over the top;] All in all, good show mate!
-jus